Okay, so I created this blog post for one reason. I want your guys opinion on what should be changed to the Happy Appy pastas. It can be either Happy Appy, FHS, Forenzik, Forenzik Journals, or Dumb Angel.
- Removing plotholes
- Reducing narm in the story
- Extending some short scenes
- Fixing some awkward parts
- Adding a new post that advances the story
Suggestions not allowed:
- Deleting the story
- Removing Forenzik
- Making a fictional character a friend of Gerasim
ADDITION 1: This is for The True Vision, not the original story.